RE: mini-steemit is live and open source, though it's ugly at this moment | 迷你steemit终于上线了并且开源,虽然有点丑
This is a super fun project, and it's great to see the origin story behind SteemGG, which is an awesome platform. I would have liked to see greater detail and explanation about the game, but I also get that it's kinda self explanatory, especially for existing Steem users.
The post was lacking in terms of grammar and style, and could definitely use some proofreading. I guess you may have written it in Chinese and translated it, according to the Utopian rules, and I appreciate that. But maybe getting someone to go over the text before publication would have been a good idea. It is difficult to read, at times. I would recommend using Hemingway to go over it, but it would also help to have a second human set of eyes.
That said, I am excited about this project's potential, and am very much looking forward to more updates for you.
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Thank you for your review, @didic!
So far this week you've reviewed 29 contributions. Keep up the good work!
Hi @didic,
Thanks a lot for your review and suggestions.
I will try my best to upgrade my english skills and have a try of the software you recommended: Hemingway.
Haha, or maybe next time I will let @stabilowl write such articles as he is good at english writing.
Then I can focus on game designing, pixel arts, and coding...
:)
Thanks again for your patience.