Ecstasy
The blatherings of the wind
Whistle, a meaning
When it morphs her black hair.
The tranquil of a flower
Breathes, a beauty
When it reposes her ear.
The melody of the rain
Drums, a song
When she pirouettes in it.
Nature allures my vision when it duos with her.
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I can hear the song and you made nature more beautiful than it already is. Really nice poem. Tip!
Thank you so much, it is too big a compliment to say I made nature more beautiful. I think, the subject referred to in this poem makes it exquisite for me. Thank you for the tip. :)
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Nice
What I personally really like about your writing style, after browsing your posts a bit. Is you add this almost natural like melody. There's almost like a rhythm where in your third sentence of every rhyme I almost hear a music note from it.
Hope to read more and thanks for posting. (:
Thanks man, I decided to write it in a rhythm. It's really motivating to see such a great comment on my work. Thanks again. :)
Very good poem, well written :)
Thank you, so much. :)