The beginning of the story attracted by attention. You have wrote the story as if you was telling your real life story to us. This was my first time read a red Indian story and their spiritual power. Normally, i only watched in movie and now i read it as a short story. The pictures complemented the story well. This really a new story line after I read few short story which voted by curie, and you have covered it well. All the best in your contest. Hope to read more of your outstanding story @angryman.