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RE: Spirit of the Indigenous 'Lenape' (1623 AD) Named "Blue Cloud"
The beginning of the story attracted by attention. You have wrote the story as if you was telling your real life story to us. This was my first time read a red Indian story and their spiritual power. Normally, i only watched in movie and now i read it as a short story. The pictures complemented the story well. This really a new story line after I read few short story which voted by curie, and you have covered it well. All the best in your contest. Hope to read more of your outstanding story @angryman.
Thank you for the compliments and positive critique. I'm happy that you enjoyed reading what I wrote.