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RE: Henry Gant, Man About Town. This Episode: Twenty four hour short story writing contest. "The Prisoner of Nomti."
Smooth
Nicely done
I didn't quite get the ending though. how did the cardboard worked.. And then I read the entire story again and... My God! It's beautiful.
I find some traces of humour in it too.
Just curious, do you believe in evolution?
Blessings
Thank you for the reply.
After the contest, I'll add that Janet wrote in her notepad, something that will suddenly explain everything. So that the reader doesn't' have to go back.
I didn't want too many clues, until the very end.
Evolution as Natural Selection, of course. Evolution as an argument, no.
The contests have been fun.
H. G.
I get that. Plus, I don't think you should add anything. Anyone who really wants to understand the story shouldn't have a problem with a second read.
About evolution, well, I'm undecided myself. I just noticed subtle hints that you might be arguing for it.
And yes, the contests have been fun. Big time, if you ask me.
Blessings
We will leave it as it is. Thank you so much.
H. G.