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RE: Finders, Keepers! (Aliens Included!) 24 Hour Short Story Contest Entry
I really liked this. Solid characterization and good use of internal dialogue, written in third person no less. Well done.
"If they find out we have aliens in the house, they might make us turn them into the government!”
Typo or subtle meaning?
Ha! Definitely a typo! Thanks for pointing that out. I kinda found the contest at the last minute, so I rushed a bit. :)
Thank you for the feedback!
@byn