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RE: Diver [a 100-word-micro-fiction]
You did a nice job of building the suspense, @siefiro. I'm glad the monster helped her back to the surface before she ran out of oxygen!
You did a nice job of building the suspense, @siefiro. I'm glad the monster helped her back to the surface before she ran out of oxygen!
Thank you. I did my best with the suspense.