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RE: Writers Block Poetry Contest Week 2: Suspension (Hammock-style)
I like this! I think the double-entendre of "suspended" [in time] here is wonderful, considering you were in a hammock. I also like the phrase "blood blue" to describe the partially-eclipsed moon, with penumbra! I also LOVE the synesthesia invoked by "chorus of light flickers." Such a wonderful image painted with so few words! Bravo! 😊
Your interpretation again planted a scenery of the beauty depicted in the word plays. Quite insightful of you.
I felt the imagery @intuitivejakob portrayed too. Well-done @thekittygirl ..do follow back. Thanks
Thank you so much for the kind observations, @thekittygirl. I am honored. 💘