You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: Thieves - [Writers Block Poetry Contest Week 1]

in #twbpoetrycontest • 7 years ago

Wow!

I'm immersed in each line.

"

There is no smile on your pretty face,
Just unblinking shallow eyes.
Two thin wet puddles on a plate of skin,
Flower petals soaked with lies
Kinda feels sad though"

So much vividness in expression. Argh!

7 years ago in #twbpoetrycontest by
$0.20
  • Past Payouts $0.20, 0.00 TRX
  • - Author $0.19, 0.00 TRX
  • - Curators $0.00, 0.00 TRX
4 votes
Reply 2
Sort:  
  • Trending
    • [-]
     7 years ago 

    Thanks! It's definitely a bit sad, but anyone that goes through a fight in a relationship probably knows what this feels like.

    $0.38
    • Past Payouts $0.38, 0.00 TRX
    • - Author $0.28, 0.00 TRX
    • - Curators $0.09, 0.00 TRX
    1 vote
    Reply
    [-]
     7 years ago 

    Yeah, I do

    Had a fight once
    I didn't love my girlfriend any more and wanted to end things.
    Told her the truth, but she felt we could still make it work.
    Had to make her angry with me to leave me.
    Ain't pound of it, but it's better than staying in a relationship that's going no where

    $0.06
    • Past Payouts $0.06, 0.00 TRX
    • - Author $0.05, 0.00 TRX
    • - Curators $0.01, 0.00 TRX
    2 votes
    Reply

    Coin Marketplace

    STEEM 0.15
    TRX 0.12
    JST 0.025
    BTC 56796.26
    ETH 2497.29
    USDT 1.00
    SBD 2.23