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RE: Unchained Chapters : Writer's Block Poetry Contest (Wk1)

in #twbpoetrycontest7 years ago (edited)

the shattered glass imagery creates a nice accompaniment to your thematic narrator, the collector of broken things.

the narrator's innocence is contrasted quite poetically by the setting and juxtaposing sibling charachters in her effort to find magic and beauty in the mundane.

a pleasant story told across your imagery - thank you for sharing.

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Thanks for such a well written comment! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem 😊

Here's a link to the contest just in case you feel like entering yourself. It's pretty fun!

https://steemit.com/contest/@thewritersblock/the-writers-block-inaugural-poetry-competition

wanted to impart the appreciation i had for such a nuanced piece - such a pleasant short story <3

and thank you so very much, good miss, i appreciate the link share.

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