RE: BaliOHBali - ISLAND FEVER, WATERFALLS , climbing A VOLCANO , embracing a NEW MIND SET & my Gypsysoul !
Love it.
"Finally I would have quality time for myself finding the artist I might have lost long time ago when my German teacher criticized me that my essays were long and way too emotional . This stuffed up Austrian "cow" blocked my urge of writing for all those years , I did not even enjoy meeting my diary. I started writing in my journals when I was high or in love and pain , my secrets but I would never dare to write for the public . :
It's really cool reading your writing on here. I can sense that artist coming out. The teacher's feedback, I can see - but it's that emotion that makes your perspectives amazing & inspirational, and its the depth to which you allow yourself to go into & express the experiences that makes for something magical when reading it.
some skill development to go through with basic grammar, paragraph spacing/separation - breaking down into smaller chunks to create for easier readibility and smoother flow - but the content is gold.
so happy to see you bursting with excitement and letting your voice loose... :-)