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RE: Zen Disrupted: drop toilet wars and meteor showers on the South Coast of New South Wales, Australia
Your description is picturesque, auditory, olfactory and gustatory. Which is generally great, except when writing is intense enough that I smelled the loo! lol.
Excellent story. And a nice way to bring it back together at the end.
Gustatory I think may be my new favourite word. I LOVE it <3
Thanks for the lovely feedback.