Thanks for the input. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Re: Your TIPS...

1. When writing it, I thought it would be too repetitive. I was also concerned about the overall length. But you're probably right. I could have written more about that and still kept it interesting.

2. I have a really bad habit of feeling a need to explain things because most people I interact with don't seem to understand my humor. It's a problem with real life that I unfortunately transfer to my writing. I'll work on that.

I appreciate the feedback. There's plenty more to write about, so I look forward to future critiques. Thanks!