Wow, this so emotional and creative! You're an expert in writing poems. I've known that you love to write poems since your blog is full of creativity but I never knew that you are this awesome! You also have a good vocabulary, which is amazing cuz English isn't your native tongue and all... Seriously, I don't know the meaning of some words, have done a little bit search ; )

You have made a beautiful picture through the poem. I love the way that this poem draws a story in my mind. I especially love these parts.

As tiny oceans kiss the ill roof
Rusted by droplets of inexplicable emotions

Out of nowhere came a guy
Chasing a fallen cherry blossom petal
Only to fall tremendously to the mud

A thunder flushed and the view has changed
Two ghosts waltzing in the dirty puddle

Young love is always a fire. It keeps burning in us until the right person comes. There can be many scars, but if you don't give up, you will find what you are seeking for : )

Sorry for the late reply. I had to wait until I was in the creative mood. Thanks for taking part in my contest. Feel free to use #tos for your future posts. Wish I could give more support to you. See you around^^