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RE: Meanderings of Nil (TMDWA #2)

in #tmdwa7 years ago

I did it and here is what came out. No time for the critical editor to do it's work. It was great not being confined by my own mind! Thanks so much for posting this cool tool.

If you say you love why does it not feel so? If you were gone I would be alone void of self not knowing who I am or what to become. Is it a sickness or is it a curse? is it neither? You are my breath,my being who I am without you? I would be lost, lost in the mire of humanness the scum would swallow me whole! I am who I am a creature of habit returning to my den each nite bellowing to the moon. My eyes tear up thinking of all that has been lost, am I really all alone? I wonder if time ever ends does it gone on endlessly never resting or is time just an illusion created by a man? What if there were no clocks would we live differently? Would money mean anything would we cease to exist? Wondering, pondering, wishing to be somewhere else is this my destiny or is there more? So many questions?

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Great! Thanks for participating, you're the first one! I admire you for being willing to be vulnerable and share your musing. It's very interesting and educational for me to see someone else's result. I find these stream of consciousness creations to be raw, powerful, and oddly deep. They also seem to contain inherent paradoxes which our conscious mind usually filters in our "normal" writing. Since paradox is a fundamental aspect of reality, perhaps we can become more comfortable with expressing it through practice methods like these. Again, thanks for your entry!!

Your welcome, although I didn't realize it was a contest😉 I actually enjoyed doing it!
You comments are very insightful, so true about the paradoxes being filtered. I call it the white dog/black dog state of being human. In other words opposing sides of the same the same coin, the same yet not. If that makes any sense.

Not a contest since there's no "winner." I guess the term "entry" was misleading lol. Anyway, I'm gonna keep doing these, and whoever wants to do it with me can join =]

And yes what you are saying makes sense... or does the sense make it?

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