• Flow - Dope flow. Cadence is real nice and consistent.
• Scheme - It works. I feel like it's lacking some consistency. Certain rhymes could use one less syllable, but that's about it.
• Content - I really liked this. Probably one of the better verses I've seen from you. Really really nice.
• Delivery - Could use a bit more emphasis on certain parts, especially when the scheme became a bit busy with the multiple rhymes per bar. Still really good, always very clear and enunciated.

All in all, I really dig it. I was waiting for that second verse to drop and then the video stopped, let me down a bit, lol. Really wanted that second verse, wanted to hear more about the story, which in and of itself speaks volumes about the content. Really cope content man, be blessed.