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I understand the core will have 10-12 committees below it. You mentioned you want to get into the energy business which is neat but I don't see this being 1 of the first 12. I think you should provide more viable options of what some of these 12 committees should be. Also mentioning paid roles is going to be a definite no for a lot of people who noticed Steem Inc did end up laying off the majority of their paid staff. However, it does make your idea stand out and different.

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