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RE: The Long Wait

I liked the switch to rhyme in the final stanza. To me it kind of symbolized a change in perspective. I also liked the contemplation present throughout the poem. None of us have all the answers and faith, whether in a deity or lack thereof, is a constant struggle fought both within and without. Nice write.

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Thanks a lot @moeknows

Yes, the switch was intentional. Wanted something dramatic but had to settle for that.

I'm actually on the other side. Used the religious flow because it was already present in the lines provided.

It's grand to have you around

You're welcome.

I'm actually on the other side.

I know, that's why I mentioned the lack thereof. One can be sure that there is no god and still wrestle with the implications of that belief in the same way that a believer in God could.

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