Tell A Story To Me - The Last Forest
You can't stay in your corner of the forest waiting for others to come to you. You have to go to them sometimes. A. A. Milne
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Submerged in the depths of nature
I discovered the last of the forest
There you hid your elusive charms.
It misses me without being able to find the exit
Try to escape from your spell
But you were stronger than the downpour.
Terrified, I sighed for help
But your padlock was strong
and suddenly wake up to the present.
© 2019, Felix Garcia P. All rights reserved.
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You are very much a true poet. You weave more than one story into so few words, all back-lit with the beautiful choices of language. "submerged" and "elusive" carry so much between them, a sense of wonder at the wilderness as well as an intimate feeling of connection. The enthralling enchantment and dream like qualities are just so wonderful. This very much feels like a poem of love, of connection found and lost, in the forest or with a person. The love of something/someone so vast and deep, filled with so much, that ultimately, it is beyond reach. I would love to see what you'd do with a sonnet, you just have such a brilliant way with words <3
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nice, forest story friend...
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Nice. Makes me think of Robert Frost.
Thank you dear friend!
Brave of you to write a poem. I tried and failed. The words wouldn't come. You set the mood nicely--the Milne quote was a good introduction. I enjoyed your poem.
@agmoore, You just have to let the ideas flow and venture to transmit them, I'm sure you can do it too. Receive my affections
Interesting poem that makes one think and reread it.
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Thanks @wakeupkitty
Me encanto la historia, y a través de la tuya arme una mia, toda una experiencia. @felixgarciap
I loved the story, and through yours I put together one, an experience. @felixgarciap
Thank you @sacra97
I haven't learned how to write poems yet. But I liked yours. I get the impression that it's not just the forest that makes you dream.
Beautiful poem, @felixgarciap. The last forest as the metaphor of love that resists being conquered. I liked it very much.
Thank you very much friend @adncabrera, I'm glad you liked my poetry.