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RE: My Script - My First Story Here
Coming in strong from the first line! The tone of address works so very well for this story. And very impressed, hit what was a very tricky prompt in every single point! The recounting of life, with the early mention of a shrink, ties in really well to the style of conversation with the entertainingly-named doctor. The concept is amazing, a mans life being run through of different ways to solve a scenario for a script, and holds such beautiful parallels to real life. The room for interpretation here is skilful, the implication at the end that he was never alive, possibly even being a computer programme, or simulation, but could equally go as now being a ghost. Very well told!
Results and the next round are out!