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RE: Pirate Hunters

in #tellastorytome6 years ago

For every story, there are more sides to tell than just that of those involved. I enjoyed the shift view from Kraken/Jevil's thoughts through your intro & Tell a Story To Me, to your FTS prompt, into Calluna's ending and then back around to your story. Your weaving pulled the bits together (albeit I had to toggle up and down to connect the dots a few times) with humor and action as well as setting up more to the next adventure.

I had quite the laugh as you introduced the golden disc with a good old "thunk" on the head. 😂

Jevil was having himself a grand time, wasn't he? (Even with the ships thwacking him here and there.) And really, who doesn't love robo-pirates? (Also, what would the equivalent for a heart attack be for a robot? Frying a circuit? - which you covered, nice!)

Clever idea to make the Kraken be more than it was cracked up to be. (This sounded funnier in my mind.) I think having Jevil use that form was a good fit, as what is more chaotic to pirates than a Kraken (well Jevil now, thanks to you. 😉)

And with a violent bang, provisions appropriate for robo-pirates and Wither fell about. Yet, the last item to fall was a massive scythe with a name-tag laced on the hilt. The words: "DEVILSKNIFE, MY WEAPON TO THE SURVIVOR WITHER!"

WITHER has acquired Devilsknife!

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