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RE: Steemit Vision Quest - Week 2: Night Flight
This was a beautiful poem. The words were so gentle, their flow was delicate.
like a babe touches her mother's face
soft skin on soft skin
glow upon glow
You got a talent for the show-don't-tell imagery. There were multiple soft repetitions that emphasise the emotion - I thought that was well done (e.g. Slender crescent arising from the depth; If I could...)