The obedient child's suspense weekend

in #suspense8 years ago


Fuente: http://www.hobbyconsolas.com/reportajes/mejores-series-terror-ciencia-ficcion-142892

Hello dear friends, thank you very much for the company, we have reached another episode of suspense weekend, surfing the web I cross with this creepy urban legend, in the midst of industrial revolution, Buenos aires was involved in a terrible social insecurity , A mother makes a recommendation to her son and ends up in the worst way imaginable.

This urban legend happened many years ago in the autonomous city of Buenos Aires, the city had grown exponentially by the arrival of many immigrants and with it criminal acts.

Buenos aires was in the period of sweet silver, a city in full industrial growth, this brought many people from the interior of the country who came to Buenos Aires attracted by the industrial revolution and the promise of work.

The city had grown industrially, but public bodies did not do so at the level of population growth, so public forces were outnumbered, and crime was the order of the day.

Robberies, motorbikes jets, lighters, extortion kidnappings, rapes and serial killer captured all the news from the news.

In the midst of this situation a woman named Luisa lived with her son in a small house in the neighborhood of eleven, Luisa, a divorced woman from her ex-husband had to go on a trip to raise her 8-year-old son. Very prestigious company at night time, this schedule did not like much, but much could not do, who would hire a divorced woman 40 years old and with an 8 year old.

Every day Luisa left when night came to fulfill her obligations, this situation always unsettled the poor mother, it was not easy for a mother to leave all night only a child as young as 8.

The critical situation of the security of the country was public knowledge, all media stressed the authorities of the country to improve the situation, but while this was solved they asked the population to be more secure, all this traumatized the poor Luisa that every night she had to leave her little son alone.

On more than one occasion she wanted to stop working to dedicate herself completely to the care of her child, but her lack of company prevented her, remember that it was a divorced woman.

One night sharing dinner with his child, moments before leaving to work, they saw a frightening news, spread of a penitentiary mutiny, in that situation a criminal of dangerousness managed to circumvent security and escaped from the penitentiary, what more traumo to Luisa was to know that she had been seen a few blocks from her home.

Luisa's head was in the air, she had to go to work, as if to leave her 8-year-old boy alone, at the mercy of knowing what might happen.

Luisa commented with the child the chilling news they had just heard, raised her child and showed how they should act from now on, closed the doors and windows by setting their corresponding locks and explained to the child how to maneuver the security of his home.

Son, Mama has something to tell you! Mami wants to stay with you all night, but you know that if I do that we do not have money to live, that's why I leave you alone at night, you have to pay close attention to what I'm going to tell you, in my absence you should not open the Door to nobody, when you leave you will lock the door, when I return I will open with mine, you should not worry you should just be careful not to open the door to anyone. Got it? Luisa asked.

If Mom understood correctly what you said Remember that I'm 8 years old, I'm not a baby! I answer the obedient child.

It's time to leave, Luisa said goodbye to her son with a big kiss, remember what I said, do not "open the door" to anyone I repeat the worried mother.

Yes, maa! Stay calm, said the boy, showing security.

When his mother left, the boy locked the door, he had to admit that he was very afraid, but that the poor child could do more than watch a TV series.

After a while I was watching TV, when I heard a knock on the door, I knocked, I touched, I touched, I touched, I touched, I touched, someone desperate to open the door, the boy hopped out of his chair and ran to the front door and said.

Are you Mommy?

After these words the repeated knocks on the door toc, toc, toc, toc, toc, and a drowned cry that said agrrrigge am puegta, these words sounded like voices of hell, the child entered an atrocious, paralyzed panic In front of the door could not help but pee in the pants that ran through the wooden parquet of the living room.

He ran and lay down on his bed and covered his sheets with his whole body, his heart beat a thousand times an hour, his little body never ceased to tremble with fear, he cries of the terror that invaded his body, and crying, I can not sleep.

At dawn the boy found that his mother did not return from his work, terror returned to his body, not knowing what to do, took courage and slowly opened the door, opening the door almost died of a cardiac arrest from what they saw his eyes .

On the floor is her dead mother surrounded by a large pool of blood, her limbs cut off, her eyes popped out, her tongue sliced ​​on the floor, this was the explanation of the voices that sounded like hell.

The boy peed again in his pants, standing hard from the trauma, luckily some neighbor could see the chilling scene and called the police.

The child did not recover from the trauma, he lost his voice, he remained silent forever, having no family member who could be held responsible, I remained in the psychiatric hospital, under the indications of temporary dementia.

The obedient child never opened the doors, had he done so, he would have saved his mother's life.


Fuente: http://bsual.net/category/terror/

Fuente: http://www.leyendas-urbanas.com/no-abras-la-puerta/

I'll wait for you tomorrow to enjoy another account of my land Corrientes.

José Luis Fernández
Corrientes Argentina


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Many thanks to you @screenname and all your team for trusting and supporting my work

seeing you post so frequently has me wondering if the 4 day post limit is over?? do you know? :)

That to me I have confused also, there was a post of Cliff that commented that it was rising, but the truth I am not sure, I by the public doubts 4 post to the day.
Today published two hours before because I had a commitment and I did not want to be in the afternoon, luckily canceled.

Oh that's scary and very sad

Is a well-known legend.
Thank you very much dear friend @ karenb54 for this great support

You are more than welcome :)

This one was scary, well done my friend @jlufer!

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