WW3 SURVIVAL - Part 1-2
It was twenty years after Hayden's birthday he and Ethan were on a plane going to a top secret military base.The plane crashed on a deserted island after being attacked . Hayden awoke to the heat and smell of fires. Ethan was unconscious. Ethan had a piece of metal stuck in his forehead and was slowly bleeding out. Hayden had spent the last 8 years in medical school. Hayden had to hurry to save his brother. Soon after Hayden pulled out the metal Ethan awoke it had been a rough 2 days. Hayden and Ethan were lost in a forest . It was the middle of ww3 Hayden and Ethan survived the first attack.Hayden and Ethan heard gunshots rat rat rat rat a rat tat tat It was machine gun fire they looked around and saw planes flying above them.
You are a very talented nine year old, welcome to Steemit!
Thank you very much and I just happen to agree with you lol.
THANK YOU I'M THE AUTHOR !!!!!!!!!
thank you I'm the author !!!!!!!!
Looking forward to what you write next. Upvoted
Thank you for supporting him! I still need to teach him about comments and replying.
No problem I am so glad to see kids here too creating content. Children are more capable than many give them credit for. I hope he keeps writing. He has a good start to a story.
I just told him he had 6 followers and he was FLOORED! Lol, amazing what excites kids. He is going to try and get on here and comment later this evening.
tell him to check his wallet he might find a surprise waiting for him there. ;)
That was very nice of you. He is going to send you a reply once he finished some chores. He was very happy!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are welcome kiddo, keep imagining..
WAR SURVIVAL -2
Interesting read! Just some CC.. Maybe space out your sentences with Tabs/Paragraphs to improve the flow of your text?
Keep at it! :)
Thanks for the feedback. This is my sons first post and he is trying to go with some creative writing. Not too bad for a 9 year old!
Oh wow! Didn't even notice. He's doing great!
Lol I think that is a great complement! If you don't notice it is a 3rd grader doing the writing then he is off to a good start!
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STOPTHANK YOU I'M THE AUTHOR!!!!!!!