Interesting read! Just some CC.. Maybe space out your sentences with Tabs/Paragraphs to improve the flow of your text?
Keep at it! :)
Interesting read! Just some CC.. Maybe space out your sentences with Tabs/Paragraphs to improve the flow of your text?
Keep at it! :)
Thanks for the feedback. This is my sons first post and he is trying to go with some creative writing. Not too bad for a 9 year old!
Oh wow! Didn't even notice. He's doing great!
Lol I think that is a great complement! If you don't notice it is a 3rd grader doing the writing then he is off to a good start!