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RE: Rebirth - A Short Story
Thank you very much. I was definitely aiming to keep it a bit shorter than my last few, so a lot of the other characters had get noises to the wayside. I appreciate the feesback. I'm trying to find a good balance as one of my irl readers says I always have too much white space! But I'm realizing now that was more in relation to the character dialogue.
Again thank you and I always appreciate your feedback. :)