#freewriting - A #tale about A broken warrior.

in #story7 years ago (edited)

Read HERE if you like to know what did happen earlier.

"Broke I feel", the warrior said, "gosh I wish I was dead."
"What's he talking about", the little creature said, "it's not the end of the world, I just saved his head!"
"He is for sure not grateful" the bird said.
"I removed that nasty splinter, like you said."
"I told you", the little monkey said, "he needs medicine."
"Might be", the snake respond, "although I think what bothers him is sin".
The warrior did open his eyes for a minute.
The wise snake saw big fear in it.
He said: "Let's give him something so he can sleep,
It's better as hear a warrior constantly weep."
They all decided to go back home
and let the warrior forget, rest and sleep alone.

This is my entry at @mariannewest her daily 5 minute freewrite 405 (prompt: broke) and 406 (prompt: the end). If you like to join (or read) have a look at her account and @freewritehouse as well. Thanks for reading this, your help and support. This story is dedicated to @arthur.grafo_

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Cute Warrior Monkey & Poem.

Two things to react to!

One is, first time ever an author has dedicated her writing to me and I'm feeling like I am floating

Second is - I'm feeling stupid. I did not read what was written correctly, just thinking of it as being a reaction to the prompts...wheres @joeyarnoldvn read it correctly.

Can you believe I had not seen it as a poem or verse? I read them all as images you placed together into an odd but beautiful story.

Now I'll have to go back and re-read them all :)

Well there is a first time for everything and since you made it possible for me to post again you deserved it. Let's see what future brings... soon you might be famous.

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