#freewriting - A #tale about a sick #warrior

in #writing7 years ago

"What is he talking about", the monkey asked.

They all gathered around the little warrior who was talking in his sleep. "Something about some person who rose out of something... a cave", the bird said.
"Pedals", the little monkey said, "I think he stole a bike." 
"It's all about the shit he did", the snake said, "I doubt he is a warrior at all. He looks like a trouble maker to me. So let's get that splinter out of him so he can go back to where he came from, as soon as possible. As a door mat he won't last long plus he attracts flies."

The little monkey gave it a try, but there was not much hold on the splinter. The big bird picked at it, but it did not do any good either.
"Better ask someone else", the snake said, he whispered some words and a second bird arrived with a small creature on it's back. "Sorry we have to disturb you", the snake said. It's tail pointed at the warrior. "Does he look familiar to you? Please help to remove a splinter out of that idiot his neck."

The little creature did as asked, made a cut in the warriors neck and the bird picked out the splinter, while the warrior was still mumbling about: rose pedals, iron hoses, cave hunting and much more, that didn't make sense to anyone.
"I wonder if he needs some medicine", the little monkey said.

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If you like to read part 1 till 3 of this story, please scroll downwards.
All parts are freewrites written in 5 minutes and contain at least 1 prompt given by @mariannewest. Every story is especially written for her daily freewrite at Steemit. The prompts used in this story are "rose pedals" and "medicine", for more information see HERE and HERE

Part 1 - how it all started, A tale about a warrior and a lizard
Part 2 - some help is needed, A tale about a warrior and a snake.
Part 3 - a splinter that really hurts, A tale about a warrior in need

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Great use of two #freewrite prompts. 👏 Bravo!

It's our "broke" resident mailman Bruni, delivering today's prompt ✉️
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https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-405-5-minute-freewrite-thursday-prompt-broke

I love how you are doing this ongoing story!! Can't wait to see what happens next :)

What fun! Such a delightful tale so far.

I am new to Steemit and just came across freewrite yesterday and am tempted to join in.

Welcome at Steemit. I hope to read your freewrites soon!

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I believe one day you will, thank you @wakeupkitty

Welcome at Steemit. I hope to read your freewrites soon!

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Hi
Your SP is too low for you to have much fun here - so I've made a small delegation to help.

I will be reversing it at the end of this year. I hope that gives you the opportunity to strengthen yourself.

Have fun

Thank you so much I am very grateful to you. The only thing I want is to write, reply, etc but that was not possible any longer. I hope to learn more how it all works over here and find a way to keep it high.

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Some people say voting for yourself is bad. I disagree. For instance, if you make a comment and someone gives you an upvote of less than 2.5 cents, that money is taken away from you.

There are two ways you can handle it. If you are sensitive about others seeing you vote for yourself, pay a bot which specialises in boosting what you earned so that it is not taken away from you. So, that means you get your own money back (almost) and get the benefit of the upvote from another.

If you are satisfied to follow your own rules of conscience and it makes sense to vote for yourself a boosting vote so as not to lose what others gave you, then do so directly, as it is far cheaper for you.

Did what I say make sense? Let me explain it better.

When you pay someone else to do the boosting, you are paying with money you earned and they keep a small percentage for them, plus you have deducted a 25% for those who voted for you - same as with your posts.

However, say I upvote you, as I did for your comment above...it cost me nothing and by you upvoting yourself, it cost you nothing from your wallet, so whatever tiny amount you earn, it is all yours, without having to first deduct any expenses-costs from your side...

Thanks for explaining now I know more about voting for yourself

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Thank you so much! I am very grateful to you. I hope I will learn more over here to keep it high in future. The only thing I want is to write, read and respond. It was less fun for sure. You made my day!

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