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RE: The reason behind the exit of male humans from earth.
No men on earth?!?! How do they reproduce?
I liked your poem at the top.
No men on earth?!?! How do they reproduce?
I liked your poem at the top.
Due to the contest topic (the exit of mankind on Earth) I came up with a fictional story to show the exit of male humans from Earth. And it happen as a result of the spell from the beautiful Allen who curse male humans not to be able to reproduce any longer.
Thanks for the compliment about the poem, I really, really appreciate it.
By the way, is there any correction you think I should make in my next attempt. Please feel free to share it.
An answer that would be fictional would have answered my nonserious question. 8-)
All I have to say at this time is if you are able to use and apply the story circle, you're doing a great job. You'll start to see the circle, either parts or the whole, in every story that is called a story.
Thank you very much for telling me my flaws and showing me the possible solution. I will do my best to make sure I come up with better fictional story in few days time.
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