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svashta (60)in #story • 7 years ago (edited)

Oh man what a rollercoaster! I thought it was just bad signal or something at first; but as I kept on reading it started to make sense what really happened. And when I had read:

December 24, One Year later

I cried internally a little.
_{What? Every man cries once in a while, even if only on the inside.}

Thank you very much for your entry! I very much enjoyed the read! :D

Quick edit: I noticed some minor grammar mistakes (more like typos, really). in case you'd like for me to point out the ones I spotted , let me know ^^

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kubbyelizabeth (66) 7 years ago

Yes let me know and I’ll make some edits. I didn’t have my final draft edited, so please let me know. Also, I’m glad you enjoyed and cried a little.

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svashta (60) 7 years ago

The most brutal accident happened right in front of me.
The car accident from about an an hour ago is blocking traffic. - minus one an
(December 24, One Year later ) - either a space between ( and december also, or no space between later and )
I know you can't read this,and can’t reply, but know that I love you. - just missing a space after the comma

I think that's all I got with the second read :P As said, merely typos.

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