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RE: The end is nigh
I agree, this concept has room to grow, and to be honest, I am pretty satisfied myself but I wanted to be true to the challenge - "Tell me a story", so I shaped this post in a way that resembled a campfire stoy, like how would someone tell a story to another person.
You definitely managed to capture that feeling, reading through feels very much like sitting down and being told a story, the kind where you would ask for more and more until it was far too late and you all had to go to bed :)