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RE: CAPTURED BY TIME (An Original Novel - Chapter 3)
Well i guess one must learn as he writes along and listen to his readers =)
I wouldn't want to give away any spoilers but i would like to comment the entertainment literature bit. I am not sure, as this will go into a much more philosphical debate with the 3rd time line (but the 3rd time line will only occur very rarely).
For now i want to try to leave some of the motives to the imagination of the reader. I am a bit afraid to go into huge deabtes by the charectures (dostoevsky style) right in the beggining as in case not scare the reader away.
ahah.. not a debate, please. I was just saying the character’s motivation was not very clear. For me that is. I presume since everybody else don't leave comments and you have over 200 people voted, the character motivations for them is clear enough, or inconsequential.
If you would say in a chicken episode something like “Charles looked at the chicken more attentively, and despite being hungry felt a little noxious imagining that he will have to take a bite out it.” This would have been much more definitive as far as what kind of person he is.
You are doing Good, wink