The Twin story!
So I had the pleasure to write a story with @hazem91
He is an amazing writer and wonderful person.
I have to admit I was a little intimidated at first cause when I read his part I was like 😲
How can I ever top that?
But I think it turned out pretty good 😊 so with no further due here's the story. Enjoy!
Very long time ago in the souls dimension, two twin soules lived happily enjoying each others company and not asking for any more than they already have. Sara was the funny random and impulsive twin. Hazem was the calm and thinkful one. One day, Sara came up with this crazy idea. “Lets get born!” she yelled.
Hazem hesitated at first but he knew he has no chance to make her change her mind. He just thought he should at least try. Once Sara decides something, the discussion is never about whether to do it or no, it’s about when and where to do it. Hazem made a huge achievement when he convinced her to spend some time to learn about the mortals dimension and what are the best parts of it and choose a country to live in.
They learned that they can’t really choose a country. There was a new country to be born in everyday and they get to decide to get born that day in that country or they wait another day. What they didn’t know back then was that a day in the souls dimension is a year in the mortals’ dimension.
They also learned that there’s a continent named Europe that is a cool place to be born in. The first day they checked was USA’s day so they decided to wait. Next day it was Canada, they also decided to pass. Third day was Sweden’s.
-“Is sweden in Europe?” Asked Sara.
-Yes let’s go. Said Hazem
-You first.
-No you go first. I’ll be right behind you. Ladies first remember?
-Oh don’t look at me like that. You’re trying to convince me that you’re letting me go first out of politeness? I know exactly what your real reason is. I heard the story about how the “ladies first” thing started.
-What? What story? I don’t know what you’re talking about.
-”Then follow me and I’ll tell you the story after we’re born. Come on let’s not miss Sweden”. Said Sara right before she jumped.
Hazem hesitated for a while then he closed his eyes and started counting.
-1..2..3! Oh no! I missed it!
He hated himself for hesitating. “Why couldn’t I just jump like my brave twin did? Did I have to count to three? What will I do now?” He thought.
His head was full of questions that kept tormenting him and driving him crazy. He’s alone now. Only few minutes passed and he misses his twin already but he cant get born now, the next country was England. He decided to keep waiting for another Sweden day.
Sara was a baby at that time and she had no memory of her previous life. The only family she had was her mortal parents. Sweden was indeed a nice place to be. If she ever remembered Hazem she would thank him for that choice.
A week passed and the countries didn't seem to come more than once.
It took Hazem a few more days to decide to take the risk this time. He swore he would jump the next time no matter what country it would be.
Hopefully he will find his twin one day.
At least they will be in the same dimension once his born.
As soon as the next country was announced, he didn't hear its name he just closed his eyes and ears and he Jumped!
And the moment he jumped a flash on the sky was lightning up the earth and suddenly Sara woke up after having the strangest dream.
It was about a boy that she never met but for some reason felt like she knew and had known forever.
She got up and then this light was brighning up the sky and again she got this dejavu feeling.
"Huh... How weard" she mumbles to herself but shakes it of.
At the same time her twin Hazem has being born in Tunisia wich was a country far far away from Sara.
Already at the hospital they said just looking at him.
This one is made for greatness and will change the world.
Noone could never have known at that time how right they were.
At the same time in Sweden the teacher in school asked Sara.
"what are you writing? You've been so distant all day"
Sara looked at her paper and saw the name Hazem written like 20 times and something about "ladies first" she was really confused and wondered if she was loosing her mind.
She kept doodling on her paper and kept seing the name Hazem and twin popping up.
Been increasing lately but she couldn't make sence out of it.
Suddenly she heard a nervous heartbeat in the classroom and realized that she could turn up her sensitivity so she could hear more clearly.
It didn't take long untill she realized that the heartbeat was her teacher miss Swansons.
Sars got uneased and had a bad feeling, and as she always been cauches she pretended to keep doodling and smiling at her teacher.
She was really afraid at this point and when she looked up miss Swanson was glancing at her and looked really nervous.
Sara just knew that something bad was about to happen.
She slowly looked for a way out and slided her bag from under her chair with her foot.
She kept smiling and doodling at the same time so Noone would notice what was going on.
She saw her opportunity off an escape through the open window.
A sad feeling went through her body as she knew that once she escape there would be no turning back or return. No time for Goodbyes.
Again the feeling of dejavu came over her.
No time to say goodbye.... Who did she say goodbye to?
She was sad about leaving her life and friends and family but knew she had no choice.
They probably had found out that she wasn't like the other kids, that she was different.
The human race was funny and amazing in many ways but really afraid of people and things that are different.
She saw her chance as miss Swanson turned and wrote on the blackboard.
She slipped out the window like a cat, but didn't run. For some reason she knew at young age that panic draws attention so she kept herself calm and kept walking.
Not knowing what her destination would be.
Safe but heartbroken and comfused.
So many questions but Noone around to give her any answers. This made her really sad.
At the same time in Tunisia the little boy Hazem grew up to a handsome wonderful teenage boy and all the girls followed him everywhere.
One day one of the girls asked hazem.
What's up with the name Sara you keep calling us?
He had no idea and lately he had all those dreams and writing the name Sara down over and over again without knowing why.
And what's up with the Twin thing he wondered.
So many questions.
One night Sara was sleeping under the starts and her tears just wouldn't stop running down her cheek..
Hazem who are you? Were are you? Why do I se you in my dreams and how do I know you?
I miss you even though I never met you
Hazem woke up in the middle of the night hearing this voice calling his name and he knew this voice very well.
But how is that possible? He got sad hearing her tears and suddenly his heart changed heart rhythm and he could feel her pain....
Sara got this ache in her heart and felt her heart change rhythm and suddenly she could feel his heart beating as it was beating in the same rhythm as hers.
Their heart was beating as one.... Both comfused about what was going on.
Sara are you ok? He asked
Hazem is that you? She asked
They could hear each other laud and clear.
How is this even possible?
Thank you @hazem91 for being patient with me and for writing this together it was really fun 🤗
Thank you all for reading!
Much Love from @saffisara and @hazem91
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Thank you so much my friend 😊 glad you liked it. Yes there was a mention of a cat... Lol
Really fun writing. And doing this together was fun
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Happy Sunday! 🤗
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Hello @saffisara. What a nice and short story. I think you should be thinking of writing a 250-300 page novel. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you @beth147. Glad you liked it.
I would but I'm not a writer like the Awsome @hazem91 he writes poems and such.
I do the short storys if ever.... Lol
Have a wonderful evening. Cheers!
Thanks and you too. Cheers!
Wow wow wow. This is great. I suggest you write a book about Sara and Hazen. You are a good writer and the story is so touching. But did Sara and Hazen ever see again or where they just speaking and listening to themselves emotionally?
Thank you so much sweetie 😊 really means a lot. We had fun writing it and joking about what to write. But this was the result.. Lol
I like to think they found each other after they could sence and hear each other 😉 I love happy endings. Have a wonderful evening. Cheers! 🤗
😂😂😂😂😂 OMG yeah you better watch out twin.... I'll bite 😈
thats what we were doing in the souls dimention 😂😂😂
enjoyinh each other's company
Damn..... I'm so enoying and mean 😂😂😂😂😂😂 hahaha
Poor Hazem! I apologize... Lol
hehe it was fun
I bet you think soo 😈 payback?
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Ahhoootttch..... 😢 lmao
was I sleepwalking ?
I would never do that on purpose!
Does it look like you are? 🤔
Mabye you just missed 😂😂
Awesome collaboration between you both such a cool story
Thank you so much Jay 😉 a little different but really fun and the ideas went from vampires to all kinds of crazy things but I guess that's for another time.... Lol
It was a fun write and Hazem is amazing in his writing and if it hadn't been for him my imagination would embarrassed us both 😂😂
Have a wonderful evening dear Jay 🤗😎
You should do more thiscwas a great read
Mabye I will just dunno what that would be about. Hey how about Jays magic world created by his amazing pictures and somehow it came to life and we get to live in it? 😁😁hahaha
Awsome world!
Lol I love the way you think 🤔🤗
hihi
Yes I think we should do it 😁🤗
Ohh... So you think so too? Awsome.... Lol 😊🤗
You know it! No stopping my mind 😂😂 and your magic world is amazing... Lol
Hazeeeem
A new story? You in? Lol
😎👍😎
OMgosh what a beautiful story the two of you wrote!!!!!
I'm so proud of you both!!!
it's so much fun to write a story with someone but it also takes guts to be open to knowing you will not be laughed at which is trust!
Awww... Thank you so much my dear friend 🤗
Really means a lot. It was really fun to write and Hazem is a great writer and if people would laugh it's probably because I always have crazy ideas... Lol wasn't easy but turned out pretty well 😉 trust is important like you say.
Have a wonderful evening dear. 💕💕
What a fantastic story - so did you and @hazem91 work on this together? Did you write little sections each or just brainstorm it together? Great story though, I had to sit and read it all the way through - far too exciting to leave. But will we get a part 2?
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#thealliance
Thank you so much dear 😊 Yes we wrote it together and wrote parts each and putted it together so it was really fun to read the results 😁 lol turned out pretty good and fun.
Our brainstorming before writing was hilarious with all kinds of crazy ideas... Lol
It was really fun and hard to... He is great at writing and I'm a little more write what my mind tells me and that can be totally crazy... Lol
Glad you liked it, means a lot.
A part 2? Well you never know... Would be fun to do another writing but we'll see.
Have a wonderful Monday my friend. Hugs 🤗🤗