I only saw that coming because I have spent a period of time some time ago reading way too many of these things XD
I think your story was well written and kinda heartstring tuggy, though I'm not sure how the person was texting if they couldn't move (perhaps they were wondering the same thing kind of vaguely? XD). Good show XD
How did you go in the contest? Or is it still going?
You say it coming, I thought most people would too. Nothing gets passed you, i think it was of the blessings of having kids. It was intended to read like the text was sent, but it wasn't, but in her mind it was. This contest is still ongoing. Unless you are referring to another, are you?
The one that you wrote this for :) I've read a lot of creepypastas and text message style stories so am familiar with a lot of plot twists and things. Doesn't stop me enjoying them though ;D
Yes I meant the contest you wrote this for/entered this one in, I've missed a few days (and a lot more posts! XD)