I loved this. I enjoyed how the ice-cream man is sinister - as readers, we do not feel as safe in this world. There is something going on. I did leave you a bunch of messages with some opinions on this.
I loved this. I enjoyed how the ice-cream man is sinister - as readers, we do not feel as safe in this world. There is something going on. I did leave you a bunch of messages with some opinions on this.
Those were my audiences inputs which have turned out really good! It's added a deeper element to the story and gets you thinking something bad is happening with the ice cream man, then it's something else entirely.
Yeah - I read the other comments afterwards. They came up with some great ideas and it truly worked!