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RE: A Dog Dies In This Story
I thought that might have been your reply. It still makes the story difficult to read, and ultimately you need to keep your readers engaged.
I thought that might have been your reply. It still makes the story difficult to read, and ultimately you need to keep your readers engaged.
I hear you. My girlfriend thinks the same thing. But I cannot budge on it, even if costs me readers. I managed to put this down exactly as I envisioned it, and I cannot compromise on my vision.
I can certainly appreciate your artistic vision and your commitment to it.