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RE: Moonfall

in #story • 6 years ago

I like the 50 word format and i'm surprised how deep and rich a story can be when so few words are used. The creative spin was a nice touch and I appreciated the description. I wouldn't have caught that myself but it gives the story a lot of depth. Brad both chased (or pursued) the item and purchased it from the rock. Very clever. Well done.

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     6 years ago 

    Hello, @leaky20,

    Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my story. I don't often write backgrounders to my 50 word pieces, but I somehow felt the urge this time.

    Actually, the sense in which I used the word "purchase" is this secondary definition:

    noun

    1. ...
    2. a hold or position on something for applying power advantageously, or the advantage gained by such application.
      "the horse's hooves fought for purchase on the slippery pavement"
      synonyms: grip, grasp, hold, foothold, toehold, anchorage, attachment, support;

    Thanks again for reading! And, if you have the chance, please check out My Library... ;)

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