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RE: Excuses, Excuses - Flash Fiction
Haha! This has such a funny hook. I do the exact same thing. One nitpick though, how could his wife not know that he has won a dart championship three times in a row?? Haha! She didn't even suspect any foul play.
Oh she knew, she wanted to stay as much as he did. I was going to make her a dart champion as well and have the joke that she throws it next time.
Haha! I'd say that I find the one you already posted more entertaining. It might've been too convoluted if you made her a dart champion as well.
Agreed