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RE: Pearlescent Poems # 11: More Or Less (Original Poem)
Nice rhymes yo!! This was very well written. "How ironic when you're bionic, with newest tech, coding and such" was my favorite line, nice internal scheme there... I up voted and followed! We have a lot in common I enjoy writing lyrical poetry as well check out my page and maybe follow back :D
Thank you very much. I specialize in rhyme and rhythm so I'm really happy you were able to pick up on the internal rhymes. I feel slant rhymes are necessary when options are few but the ironic bionic fell into a nice duet off a whim. I definitely appreciate your support and feedback. I will definitely check out your page for further inspiration. I'm all for lyrical poetry, hope you enjoy my other posts as well.