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RE: Unproven Chapter Twenty Six "Souvenirs and Scuba Divers"
A week?!?! Ary was gone for a whole week ... with her grandmother believing she was simply staying over at a friend's house the whole time ... without dropping by a single time to pick up something or for a quick hug since they have been so close?!? That's a stretch for me.
Still, I am loving the story.
She told her grandmother she was going on a trip, (a couple chapters prior it is mentioned) lol, she was aware she wouldn't be home or nearby at a friend's. However, I just realized one of the chapters I ended up removing of her time in Hawaii contained details on her phone calls checking in. I'll have to go back over it, see what I can do.
Gotcha. The way it reads now she left her grandmother a note saying she was going on a trip with a group of friends. Most high school students don't just take off on a trip without providing more details if they are living with family members that are close to them.