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RE: #Fiftywords Short Story Challenge::: Tragedy!!
Im not sure if I was reading violence or a game they were playing because of the child giggling. I'm confused :O
Im not sure if I was reading violence or a game they were playing because of the child giggling. I'm confused :O
No need to get confused, I've tried my best to tell it in fifty words... Maybe the word "baby" would have done it better than "child". He doesn't understand life nor it's troubles. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
I see what you are saying, my apologies :) I think it is very well written and have shown chaos in a horrible life. The laughter just set me off a bit.
I understand! It's a mixed reaction for me too... It's a sight I'll live with forever. I'm glad the prompt allows me to share an experience.