RE: Outwithye Olde, an Inn with a View
Oh, man! The wait is finally over and I'm honoured that this time I get a chance to comment to your work! And it was every bit of imaginative and awesome as I thought it'd be.
It's too easy to leave comments behind just to make people happy or just be to be nice, but believe me when I say from my heart that you need to create more! Feelings of when I read your mysterious short story. Could a relive each scene like I was there? Check. Could I connect with the characters you wrote? Check. Did I want to know more after reading the final few words? Check.
You clearly have so much intelligent inventiveness within as it simply pours out in this story. The air of mystery as to who Deux is? Who is the old man? How did he end up waking up on that grassy plain? What is that odd island far away in the distance?
You made that world, bro. And wove that place into existence to the point that I could envisage everything. And that is the magic that a good writer can wield! The story flowed steadily whilst building upon pace and narrative until the very chilling end. I got goose bumps when she turned into that woman!
You are an extremely talented writer (which doesn't come as a surprise to me, judging by your previous work) and you have so much greatness to offer to us! I'm loving this little group of authors we have formed and it's all because of my bro, @jedau.
Simply beautiful and a phenomenal comeback. Eagerly watching out for more to come from you, my brother. Pure brilliance!
Thank you for the kind words, brother! It's so strange to be on the receiving end of well-thought out comments. I don't ever want to get used to the feeling :D
I really love experimenting with stuff when I write, so I'm glad it translates well. Admittedly, it was longer than I initially intended, but this is something I couldn't divide into parts. I'll be unveiling my series two days from now, so that I can finally join you and @dreemit in that regard :) I just really hope it doesn't disappoint.
"Deux Mil Dekses" is roughly translated as 2016 from French, Spanish and Esperanto, because I just wanted to give the outgoing year a proper send off. I've peppered in tons of mystery in so that readers can just dissect the story and interpret it in whatever way they please. Reading all these praise from you ... I feel very undeserving, but I appreciate every single word, my brother! It's a huge honor for you to say those things :D
I really enjoy building groups and communities that support each other, so here's to strengthening our little group and hoping that we would reach for the heavens together in the coming year! :D
Hey brother, was scrolling down the page and read some of the comments below about how you feel writing and all for Steemit. You must believe me when I say that you have an extraordinary way with words. This little writers trio we've formed with @dreemit is something very dear to me. It no easy feat to convey your own personal thoughts to another armed with nothing else but the power of the written word. But you do that, expertly I might add.
I saw the movie clip was created for me in my mind's eye. You built that world for me and I got lost in it. How special is that? I consider that a special gift and one that needs nurturing and honing.
Give your articles time and consistently post. You will get the recognition you deserve without a doubt, but one thing is for sure. You'll always have myself and the lovely @dreemit spurring you on to do better and better.
Such artistic talent will not go without due merit and I cannot wait to see what new adventures lie in store within the pages of your upcoming book.
From a loyal fan, bro. Keep up the amazing work! :)
Man, these are such wonderful sentiments to begin the year. I'm truly grateful for the encouragement that you and @dreemit provide, my brother. I hope that we would all continue to achieve success together in the years to come! :D