INDENTURED SOLITUDE (An Original Short Story In 4 Parts)
Installment 1 of 4
It was four thirty in the morning and Ernest stared blankly through the fog that clung to the window of the black cab. He found himself lost in the lights of London shimmering on the Thames. He realized how close he was to getting the one thing he most desired.
“How far away are we?” Ernest asked the cab driver.
The cabbie glanced up and their eyes met briefly in the rearview mirror.
“Six more blocks, Sir, roughly,” he answered with a faint Hindi accent.
Ernie reached into the inside pocket of his wool pea coat for a wad of Pound notes and started thumbing through them.
“You can drop me off right here.”
The driver pulled to the curb, draping his thin arm across the back of the passenger seat.
“That’ll be an even fifty-five quid, please.”
“Keep the change,” Ernest nodded as he slid two crisp and carefully folded fifty pound notes in the driver’s ashen palm.
The driver quickly jerked his hand away.
“Ouch! Nothing starts off a shift like a paper cut! Paper cuts are like annoying little f*cking barking Chihuahuas only you can hear,” the cabbie said.
Ernie laughed to himself and immediately repeated the line under his breath so he wouldn’t forget it. Life sometimes handed you these glorious lines, words that deserve to live forever in fiction and this was just such a gem.
“Thanks, mate. Enjoy your stay.”
One more act of kindness can never hurt my chances he thought closing the cab door and watching the taillights of the taxi as they disappeared into the darkness.
Despite how unfair the world seemed Ernie still believed in karma. Besides, money would be of no use to him where he was going now. Taking in a few deep breaths of the cool, fresh air he almost forgot for a moment why he was here.
Ernie had been extremely shy as a child and life was easier when he lived it inside his head. He spent most of his childhood within the confines of his own imagination. Solitude was Ernest’s cocoon, the shield that protected him from the world’s harshness, and over time solitude grew to be his best friend. Back then, if he wasn’t scribbling in his bedroom you could find him lying on the shag carpeting in front of his parent’s console T.V. engrossed in some British sitcom on PBS or Benny Hill.
Ernie had always felt an unexplainable familiarity with British culture. He loved their dry wit and even the gloomy weather. It didn’t surprise him when he discovered later in life that his ancestors had immigrated to America from Warwickshire in the late 1600’s. He’d always suspected he’d lived a past life as a Brit but now his theory leaned more towards genetic memory.
He sighed heavily and made his way up the lane against the biting November wind. He tried to focus on the rhythm of his footsteps instead of his fears but he was failing miserably at it. It didn’t help that his brain still buzzed from too many cups of coffee during the flight. He could never sleep on planes so any trip over four hours was pure torture.
As he turned the corner he realized that this would be the last block he would walk as a free man. As charming as this neighborhood was, each step brought with it a greater feeling of dread.
This is my own green mile, he thought.
He wasn’t literally losing his life but it felt like it.
To be continued (installments 2, 3 , & 4 of this story are coming soon.)
~eric vance walton~
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This is getting good - more, please!
Thanks, @fairytalelife ! The new installment is coming today! 😊
Nice story @ericvancewalton
Thank you, @faraz !
cant believe NYer turned this down...
Thanks, @cristi . The New Yorker is notoriously choosey. I know now there was a reason they turned it down, it was meant for Steemit.
Very interesting... I hope this story has a continuation
Amazing story and pictures @ericvancewalton
Nice dialog, I am hooked.
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Thanks everyone! Installment 2 has been posted - https://steemit.com/story/@ericvancewalton/indentured-solitude-an-original-short-story-in-4-parts