The Grey's world (unedited text) part 1 Chapter 1

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Author note: Welcome fellow steemians this is unedited text so please forgive me the lack of much interpuncion and load of spelling mistakes I'm probably going to do but if you enjoyed my work of fictionised reality please upvote and reestem.thanks hope you enjoy all comments welcome.

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He walked towards the shore and as expected saw no one around. It was a cold dark wet night as usualy unpleasant this time of the year, and anyway they rarely came out after dark, good for him. He carried on towards the unlit hut. As he walked he could just about work out the muddy surface of the tidal marshland, unhurriedly he carried on he had plenty of time the tide wouldnt cut him of for another 3 or 4 hours even if things got bad at some point he knew he could easily swim back to the boat if he'd leave his backpack behind but a night swim this time of year was definately something he didn't fancy even less than loosing his backpack. The surface under his feet changed from mud to gravel then finally to hard concrete of the car park. Not far now just another 300 meters and he'd be inside the hut safe from anybody spotting him from any of the windows of the few houses nearby, not that he expected anybody to be about at this time or that anybody would be looking for him but better safe than sorry, thats how he managed to prevaile for so long. There were others like him still about or so he hoped in the past he met a few when it was all starting but a while passed since his last encouter with a Normal and the way that went maybe for the better. He got inside the hut and quickly started filling the water containers from his back pack, he didn't fancy being surrounded inside the hut housing the public toilets, he felt much safer in the open even better on his little boat but he needed the water, he could only collect so much from the rainwater catching containers on deck. Once all 3 containers were full he listened in silence just to make sure there is nobody outside and once sure he began his return journey. Another successful trip he thought to himeself with a bit of dark humour as he walked off the concrete of the car park into the muds of the tidal marshland. His joy was shortlived as his thoughts returned to the matter of the rapidly diminishing food supply but he'd worry about that later, there were still 2 other boats on swivel moorings in the tidal harbour, maybe he'd get lucky for a change and find a nice stash of canned food on one of them, all in its own time no point in rushing he was safe for now. They never walked out past the tide line nor did he ever see any planes in the sky or cars driving anywhere near the speed limit not even pedestrians crossing the road in other than designated areas which in rural areashe found quite comical, seeing them from far away walk a mile just to cross a street on which you saw a car once a week if you were lucky and even then it would be going the usual 20 miles an hour tops it was a weird world in which as if a mad paranoid health and safty executive was in charge nobody did anything that could be considered even slightly risky even by the most extremely paranoid standards, like everybody was so scared of any harm coming to them that it prevented them from living in the first place.

To be continued. ..

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You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:

The surface under his feet changed from mud to gravel then finaly to hard concrete of the car park.
It should be finally instead of finaly.

Thanks as said in the note I'm sure there is plenty more :).
Let me know what you think about it in general.thanks
Argh trying to talk with a bot again.

I guess the good thing about bots is that there are no hard feelings;) Your first chapter is great!

Thank you very much chapter 2 comming soon.
Sorry for late reply but my internet connection was down.

No problem;)

hey man! I missed this, just saw it now.. im going to document the first bicycle trip as i wrote a diary on it, and i was going to go check out d.books! actually thanks for the reminder, no better time than Now! maybe you should check it out also for this?

Whats d.books googled it but nothing coming up.
I think I'll start a blog/diary once I get moving should put sail up this weekend for trials
this was something to kill time with when the weather was shit so I wouldnt go bonkers from boredom.
Got another near 2 chapters ready to post
But since the markets moved im trying a bit of trading

the market is looking great again :) just one coin im still down on. Pen and paper does stop insanity :)

Which coin is that?

DGD, oh and SNT :) and a few TRX haha i was just remembering the DGD :) but anyway they are to hold for a while and theres 2 million I think without checking, token supply

I kept away from dgd and snt just never appealed to me
Trx Got some in an airdrop when they were starting made some trades then bought a few k between china ban fud and end year explosion cant remember exactly and sold it the day it went mad and did like 3x in value only I sold just before that still made a nice profit dont get me wrong but not compared to what I could have if waited another 6 hours.
typical.
then bought some back and been sat on it ever since :(

hahahhahaha great thats better tahn my luck! I was locked out of binance because i lost my fone and had to reset the google auth.. fuck i missed to sell all, like ripple, i payed 24 cents for and it went to fuckin 3 usd!!! I dont event think it was on binance then actually lol. and Tron! paid 240 satoshis for a shit load and wasnt able to sell them lol. Anyway i think i might just go on holdly mode and trade when im in double profits already hahahahaaha..Ah man last year i lost 1000s of quids (physically and potentially) and just a couple hundred usd on actually trading bad lol! Any way this year will be better im just putting all on binance, fuck wallets apart from ledger. I got me stella and doge and digibyte on the ledger and havent even learnt how to move them off hahahahahaahahah

Not too keen on binance to be honest I more stick to hitbtc poloniex and bittrex though the last one is annoying me lately.
Bought load of xrp when it first came out sold because it wasnt making much progrss
Bam
Then it lost again thought its a buy in time again got dishearted sold and
Bam
So now I try to always have a fair size stash I could see it easly go + 2$ in next weeks

Got it now cheers
With google searches some shit on youtube kept coming up

Have a look at my crypto posts a bot I have nothing to do with is paying me to talk to myself lol

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