Oh good, I was hoping it would have that effect- and actually it should get even better for you over the next several chapters, a bit more character development. (The next chapter is a Jess chapter, and...well I didn't bring this detail into the book)

Thanks! The sales did quite well initially, now there's a drop off but I expected that. Basically Howie won't start aggressive promoting until the second book comes out (and by then Unproven will be out too, that's actually what I'm currently working on, the revisions to it- some of them based on things you've said along the way :)