If you chose giving, give your best (Original Poem)
In life we have a lot of options,
We can have fun, bring joy and other cool emotions.
We can just live for sake of living
Or we can find our way of giving.
This way may be distinct from others.
Use passion, creativity and lots of colors.
The only thing you need to know in giving quest
Is just make sure if you chose giving, give your best.
Don't give an average presentation,
Make people leave the meeting with the inspiration.
Don't play the game on lower level,
Use all your strengths and win the medal.
Don't publish average simple post,
Take time to make your thought composed.
Don't write the book that will not make the difference
In people's life, especially on distance.
If you show dance, create the greatest movement,
Embrace the challenge and a self-improvement.
If you decided publish application,
Make sure it is terrific and it will transform the nation.
By giving best you show that difference
Between the mediocrity and excellence.
Live life in way so you submit:
You know, I crushed it, and you can admit.
Nice work. You kept a decent rhythm through out the poem. You conveyed your idea clearly. If I could suggest though, add more detailed imagery in the work. Imagery draws the reader in and creates an environment in their head that becomes semi-tangible. Thank you for taking the time to compose this and share with our community. :)
Thanks for genuine feedback. I really appreciate that.
I know that my style is a little bit different and imagery is going to be a challenge for me but I suppose with time I'm going to develop my skills and make it more interesting for others to read.