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RE: If you chose giving, give your best (Original Poem)
Nice work. You kept a decent rhythm through out the poem. You conveyed your idea clearly. If I could suggest though, add more detailed imagery in the work. Imagery draws the reader in and creates an environment in their head that becomes semi-tangible. Thank you for taking the time to compose this and share with our community. :)
Thanks for genuine feedback. I really appreciate that.
I know that my style is a little bit different and imagery is going to be a challenge for me but I suppose with time I'm going to develop my skills and make it more interesting for others to read.