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RE: A Lungfull of Sacrifice - SciFi Short Story - Steemit Exclusive
Smooth, professional writing!
You could sell this to a pro magazine/ezine.
Love this:
“Because we must all sacrifice,” she replied...
“You don’t!” Page screamed ...He was going to die, while she got to live. The unfairness of it stung almost as much as the understanding that after all those centuries, he still wanted to live. Perhaps more than ever.
Thanks! I have a few more like it in various stages of completion. Kind of like little Black Mirror episodes. I am fairy new to short stories and it's hard. I am used to writing long stuff, poems and work texts. But this story might actually end up published somewhere else too. When I find the time. :)