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RE: Chuck, Serendipitous Part 1: The Story of an Unexpected Journey
~The priest looked real enough, but you could never tell
with things like this. Chuck rubbed his eyes and blinked.
The priest was looking at him with a really strange look at this point.~
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Ooh, I like fictional priests
(( Note: beware repeating a word, e.g.
looked, looking, look - find verbs that work harder and nouns that do like pictures, painting a thousand words))
Great advice. Thank you! I'll try to put that into practice and be more careful of repeats!