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RE: Chuck, Serendipitous Part 1: The Story of an Unexpected Journey

in #story7 years ago

~The priest looked real enough, but you could never tell
with things like this. Chuck rubbed his eyes and blinked.
The priest was looking at him with a really strange look at this point.~
=
Ooh, I like fictional priests
(( Note: beware repeating a word, e.g.
looked, looking, look - find verbs that work harder and nouns that do like pictures, painting a thousand words))

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Great advice. Thank you! I'll try to put that into practice and be more careful of repeats!

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