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RE: Cruel and Unusual - serialised novel EXCLUSIVE to Steemit Part 42
Yes of course I've read the novel part before.
And also I have read this novel as a continuation of the previous.
But here, I do not get the danger and scare as in the previous novel is very scary.
Here just the conversation between the two while walking.
But their second conversation is very useful, they give each other what is wrong and what is right and gives a view of who is wrong in the matter that passed. Both of their utterances will be profitable for both of them too.
thanks for sharing. very interesting.
I will wait for the next part.
Thank you for reading and commenting. Feedback is always welcome and useful.
When writing a story, there needs to be a rhythm - an ebb and flow - constant tension all the way through would become boring and it would be difficult to maintain.
Putting a lull in the story allows the reader to catch his or her breath before the next piece of tension hits.