I'm not normally one for bathroom humor, either, but the wording hit me just right.

You know what's coming up in the story, so however you feel it works best is what you should do. It's a little easier when you have it all written and can see how it flows than it is for the reader who only sees chunks at a time. I know you're creating it on the fly, but you probably have some broad points you're working toward, at least, and have a good idea of the direction you're going and how to get there.

Was I being encouraging? On purpose? :) I'm trying to just enjoy it from a reader's point of view first and foremost and then try to deposit any pearls of wisdom I think I might have from a writer's perspective.

Mainly, though, I'm just enjoying the trail ride.